In order to get replies you must participate actively in the form by also spreading the love and reviewing other people's Tunes. That being said this I don't even know what to say about, but it's not good brother sorry
Dunno what you criticizers mean, this has more potential than half the tunes i hear on here. Interesting arps coupled with heavily distorted baselines FTW. However it does lack interest mate. I would say your next step is to consider how you make this interesting. It sounds a bit thrown together lets say. some deeper thought and your onto something N1!
Bassline "hook" needs to be a bit more complex lets say?