DnB can i have some criticism over here

Piss Dave

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You're a cunt.

With a shit haircut & you reek of piss.

Even your nan hates you & secretly wishes you were dead.

When you turn up at parties, everyone slowly fucks off to other rooms cus they can't stand you & your highly punchable face.

You also fuck kids & once wanked a cat off with your bum.
 

Manu Forti

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Dunno what you criticizers mean, this has more potential than half the tunes i hear on here. Interesting arps coupled with heavily distorted baselines FTW. However it does lack interest mate. I would say your next step is to consider how you make this interesting. It sounds a bit thrown together lets say. some deeper thought and your onto something N1!

Bassline "hook" needs to be a bit more complex lets say?
 
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