DnB can i have some criticism over here
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In order to get replies you must participate actively in the form by also spreading the love and reviewing other people's Tunes. That being said this I don't even know what to say about, but it's not good brother sorry
Piss Dave
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You're a cunt.
With a shit haircut & you reek of piss.
Even your nan hates you & secretly wishes you were dead.
When you turn up at parties, everyone slowly fucks off to other rooms cus they can't stand you & your highly punchable face.
You also fuck kids & once wanked a cat off with your bum.
With a shit haircut & you reek of piss.
Even your nan hates you & secretly wishes you were dead.
When you turn up at parties, everyone slowly fucks off to other rooms cus they can't stand you & your highly punchable face.
You also fuck kids & once wanked a cat off with your bum.
ifanmusic
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The ideas are just really not there I'm afraid - all the elements don't really gel and it sounds a bit all over the place. Keep at it though mate!
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Dunno what you criticizers mean, this has more potential than half the tunes i hear on here. Interesting arps coupled with heavily distorted baselines FTW. However it does lack interest mate. I would say your next step is to consider how you make this interesting. It sounds a bit thrown together lets say. some deeper thought and your onto something N1!
Bassline "hook" needs to be a bit more complex lets say?
Bassline "hook" needs to be a bit more complex lets say?
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