Drum & Bass unmd - crystal clear (third track ever done ;d)

Discussion in 'Production' started by unmd, Jan 18, 2012.

  1. unmd

    unmd Member

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    Hi,
    I am new there, working with fl studio for like 3 months, done 3 tracks ever and it's my new and the best one. Liquiddddddddd

    Hope You like it, criticize, give cons and pros, peace :)
     
  2. Gui11aum3

    Gui11aum3 New Member

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    It's crap. The bass just doesn't go with the melody, my main issue.
    But it certainly is better than my third song!
     
  3. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    in terms of production, it was, alright.

    musically, well, it's left me slightly confused to be honest.
     
  4. lostnthesound

    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    This. I had a difficult time following the "structure" of the song as well. There is a certain ebb and flow when it comes to music structure and arrangement, and this track is lacking that.

    Also, please post tracks for review here in the future.
     
  5. neddez

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    lol you'd make a good diplomat

    what the others said, your production is okay but the whole thing doesn't really mash
     
  6. unmd

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    Cheers guys, i'll will work about making same rhytm with bass and melody, honestly bass was used from ready pack, but the rest was 100% made by me :p.
    Again cheers, i'll work harder & don't share a shit haha :p.