DnB unmd - crystal clear (third track ever done ;d)

[unmd]

Hi,
I am new there, working with fl studio for like 3 months, done 3 tracks ever and it's my new and the best one. Liquiddddddddd

https://soundcloud.com/unmd%2Fcrystal-clear

Hope You like it, criticize, give cons and pros, peace

 

[Gui11aum3]

It's crap. The bass just doesn't go with the melody, my main issue.
But it certainly is better than my third song!

 

[elmaruk]

in terms of production, it was, alright.

musically, well, it's left me slightly confused to be honest.

 

[lostnthesound]

in terms of production, it was, alright.

musically, well, it's left me slightly confused to be honest.

This. I had a difficult time following the "structure" of the song as well. There is a certain ebb and flow when it comes to music structure and arrangement, and this track is lacking that.

Also, please post tracks for review here in the future.

 

[neddez]

This. I had a difficult time following the "structure" of the song as well. There is a certain ebb and flow when it comes to music structure and arrangement, and this track is lacking that.

lol you'd make a good diplomat

what the others said, your production is okay but the whole thing doesn't really mash

 

[unmd]

Cheers guys, i'll will work about making same rhytm with bass and melody, honestly bass was used from ready pack, but the rest was 100% made by me :p.
Again cheers, i'll work harder & don't share a shit haha .