yes, more sparkle -- I'll listen on monitors tonight if I getta chance -- big tune as always though
yeh listening on HR824s it needs some sparkle for sure, not sure on the comment about 8K, just undo whatever you did a little with the multiband.
switching your mix to mono loses a lot of the sheen and some of the mid-bass, maybe tighten your image up on the percussive elements.
your snare and kick don't quite cut through the mix enough for my taste, but that's just taste maybe?
kicks get a little louder during the bridge, but sounds more by design than a problem with the mixdown.
perceived loudness definitely isn't up in the release range, but the mixdown is clean so you could always leave that up to the pros
turn the volume on your mix waaay down, and notice the drum track is a bit quieter than the rest of the tune, especially the surface noise you have way outside the mix. maybe a really transparent limiter (or opto compressor) would make your mix sound more cohesive. ...and won't piss off the mastering engineer