Relentless - Hatred (My first track)

[Grayson]

https://soundcloud.com/relentless-2%2Fhatred

My first track I've made, definitly on the harder Drum & Bass side... just kinda happened lol.
I would very much appreciate any feedback / comments / suggestions

Enjoy! Hopefully... :p

 

[subprime]

Not much sub bass going on, a lot of distortion (or is it clipping?) That sound you've used for a snare is a bit odd. To pull this off I'd reckon you need to tighten up the drums forever, get some proper double million metal stylee kick drums happening with a good snare and a bit more control over the over-all sound.
The idea is cool and proper dark. First track eh? Did you meet Neomind yet? He could probably give you some good adxice for this business.

 

[Grayson]

Thanks for the advice mate, i'll have a crack at doing some work on it. What do you mean by tightening up the drums forever? And also, any ideas where i can get some good refills for this kind of sound? Haven't met neomind yet, i'll have to try and get in touch with him

Cheers