new jump up track for critiquueee

[Murko]

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https://soundcloud.com/murkodnb%2Felemental-battle-clip

new jump up tune on the go looking for a bit of feedback? thanks![/FONT]

 

[JoErOe]

pretty cool stuff. I haven't quite made up my mind about jump up, (as I'm confused as i remember it being the more uplifting Hospital style stuff, but i digress, genres mean nothing 8) ) but your tune has all the right elements. i feel the drums could cut through a bit more, and the sub was a bit static for my taste as well. maybe try some filtered layers, or eq/sidechain the bass to the kick perhaps?? either way solid work and keep it up!

 

[Murko]

nice thanks for the advice! yeah this isn't my usual style of jump up as its not dark enough

 

[Robert _G]

A like the vibe of this, really catchy.

 

[BattleteK]

The sub is not present in the mix and the bass synth that kicks in at 0:34 is not really my thing, too overused for my liking. Snare could kick through a bit better if you sidechain it off the sub probably.

 

[MentalFrame]

Good energy! Nothing to say, that hasn't already been said

 

[Rounder RG]

Pretty catchy and love the samples. Low end is pretty weak across the board. Kicks dont have a lot of bottom and sub isn't really registering at all for me.

Good starting point though!