new jump up track for critiquueee

JoErOe

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pretty cool stuff. I haven't quite made up my mind about jump up, (as I'm confused as i remember it being the more uplifting Hospital style stuff, but i digress, genres mean nothing 8) ) but your tune has all the right elements. i feel the drums could cut through a bit more, and the sub was a bit static for my taste as well. maybe try some filtered layers, or eq/sidechain the bass to the kick perhaps?? either way solid work and keep it up!
 

Murko

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nice thanks for the advice! yeah this isn't my usual style of jump up as its not dark enough
 

BattleteK

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The sub is not present in the mix and the bass synth that kicks in at 0:34 is not really my thing, too overused for my liking. Snare could kick through a bit better if you sidechain it off the sub probably.
 

Rounder RG

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Pretty catchy and love the samples. Low end is pretty weak across the board. Kicks dont have a lot of bottom and sub isn't really registering at all for me.

Good starting point though!
 
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