yeah, i've now replaced that horrid sounding synth with a sample of a spitfire flying overhead (it works, oddly) and sorted the levels out a bit, gonna leave it for a week and come back to it with fresh ears. Probably gonna record a shit load of random noises as i see this one going in that direction
Try cutting out your kick drums and snares in your break. Do you have any kind of compression unit? What program are you using? Find any tutorial that teaches you about compression and with your kick and snare compress them. Get them standing out and sitting with the bass a little more.
The road is endless! I just keep making tracks to see how they end up lol... Been messing with Hiphop and some other funky stuff lately. Big DNB fan myself but if it sounds good, i don't care what it is lol.
updated again (see sig), added another section with a little variation...getting a little sick of hearing it so may leave it for a week or two, plus my PC is shitting itself trying to process everything, and there isn't even that much there.
updated yet again. coming together quite nicely, about ready to start building it into a full tune, but not quite sure how to keep it varied up...maybe just dropping out tracks and brining them back in every 16 bars?