Thanks men <3Not too bad if you just started on dnb.
I like the intro/break.
The drop is a bit monotone and repetitive, the bassline could use 1 or 2 more sounds to further diversify. for example every 2 bars you could end your bassline with a different sound.
The drums could use some more rolls at the end of phrases.
and lastly you could add some sweepers and crashes to add diversity and to add transitions to new phrases
you're definitely in the right direction with the sounds you got so far for jump-up
Hope this helps!
Thanks men <3