DnB [JUMP UP] I need opinions about this tune [JUMP UP]

STLLR

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Oct 20, 2013
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Antwerp, Belgium
Not too bad if you just started on dnb.

I like the intro/break.
The drop is a bit monotone and repetitive, the bassline could use 1 or 2 more sounds to further diversify. for example every 2 bars you could end your bassline with a different sound.
The drums could use some more rolls at the end of phrases.
and lastly you could add some sweepers and crashes to add diversity and to add transitions to new phrases

you're definitely in the right direction with the sounds you got so far for jump-up

Hope this helps!
 

Alejandro Giovanna

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Jul 4, 2016
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Mérida
Not too bad if you just started on dnb.

I like the intro/break.
The drop is a bit monotone and repetitive, the bassline could use 1 or 2 more sounds to further diversify. for example every 2 bars you could end your bassline with a different sound.
The drums could use some more rolls at the end of phrases.
and lastly you could add some sweepers and crashes to add diversity and to add transitions to new phrases

you're definitely in the right direction with the sounds you got so far for jump-up

Hope this helps!
Thanks men <3
 

STLLR

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Oct 20, 2013
Location
Antwerp, Belgium
now that i listened to it again on good monitorsi noticed that the hihats are barely prominent during the drop. Adding more hihats could improve the track as well, it adds more danceability xD
 
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