DnB [JUMP UP] I need opinions about this tune [JUMP UP]

[Alejandro Giovanna]

My name is dellsoda.
I just started on Drum & Bass
And I would like some opinion about this song.
I would be very grateful.
Greetings.

https://soundcloud.com/dell-soda%2Fdell-soda-with-honor

 

[STLLR]

Not too bad if you just started on dnb.

I like the intro/break.
The drop is a bit monotone and repetitive, the bassline could use 1 or 2 more sounds to further diversify. for example every 2 bars you could end your bassline with a different sound.
The drums could use some more rolls at the end of phrases.
and lastly you could add some sweepers and crashes to add diversity and to add transitions to new phrases

you're definitely in the right direction with the sounds you got so far for jump-up

Hope this helps!

 

[Alejandro Giovanna]

Not too bad if you just started on dnb.

I like the intro/break.
The drop is a bit monotone and repetitive, the bassline could use 1 or 2 more sounds to further diversify. for example every 2 bars you could end your bassline with a different sound.
The drums could use some more rolls at the end of phrases.
and lastly you could add some sweepers and crashes to add diversity and to add transitions to new phrases

you're definitely in the right direction with the sounds you got so far for jump-up

Hope this helps!

Thanks men <3

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

Thanks men <3

I love it. I'd rinse it out with another tune and cut it the fuck up. mixdown is well done. Loving the second breakdown. I agree added variety in the drums and bassline both would increase the interest level of this tune but that being said I really really like it. good work.

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

welcome to the forum brother

 

[Alejandro Giovanna]

welcome to the forum brother

Thanks for the recommendation , I will add more variety to the drums, and Thanks for the support!

 

[STLLR]

now that i listened to it again on good monitorsi noticed that the hihats are barely prominent during the drop. Adding more hihats could improve the track as well, it adds more danceability xD