DnB Could i have some feed back please? :)

[TransmuteUK]

Regen

This is being released on a free album, but i would like some early feedback if possible? Much appreciated.
I am a new producer, this is will be my first release... I think.

https://soundcloud.com/liam-grant-468421454%2Ftransmute-regen-clip

 

[Manu Forti]

Pretty good for being new but its a little bit bland for my taste. I think part of the experience is realising that this art will take time to master. That being said it actually seems to have the elements in place for a jump ap / mainstream tune... But i wouldnt dance to that, cos i dont dance i jsut sit inna corner stroking my chin to the latest autonomic sound

Keep at it though. Mix/Master sounds good.