Tony Anthem & erb N dub - fire bun [marlok remix] Version 2

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  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    taken on board the feedback i got an made some changes
    still mite need a better mixdown
    quite happy with how its comin together though

    all feedback is needed:teeth:
    cheers
     
  2. BLoodstaiN`

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    Feels to me (And i'm a jump up kind of guy) like there's not much happening, Like it's all intro, it feels to me that it doesn't really kick off.
    but maybe that's because it's me.
    not like i'm the most experienced guy to say
     
  3. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    i actually prefered the original tbh :(

    not sure what it is exactly though :/ think its the additional b-lines, kinda feel forced? just my opinion though, others may say different
     
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    SC I've discussed this with a few of the members before off the forum and we've all agreed that youve come along the best in production in years, the only thing you lack, and this is a big lacking is originailty, and when you crack that you could be big. Gunna stick it in, whether it hurts you or not is up to you.
     
  5. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checkin
    ill get back too it i dont recon ill entrer it in the comp but i wanna get it good for myself
    i aint done much to the bass on the first part i dont think but ill see whats goin wrong
    i also stuck the original bassline bit in there as its a remix an thought itd be good guess not!lol
    oh an jmz it dont hurt that much [​IMG]
    ill try an be more original but thats quite hard considering all the other producers an tunes out there
    oh an cheers for seeing me as the best improved producer!:D
    im not trying to be a big producer tho i just enjoy makin tunes its a good pass time for me stops me drinkin all the time except i do!lol
     
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  6. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    Actually after listening a few times again, I've come round to it... I think its the mix of the original bass that's the problem, I actually like it now, it just sounds 'off'
     
  7. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    maybe if i just kept the womp and a few other elements on the other half it may work
    i know it dint sound rite but i kinda liked the strangeness of it!lol
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    oh an bloodstain im not sure what u mean about it soundin like a big intro i can quite clearly distuinguish the drop
     
  9. BLoodstaiN`

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    Yeah, i know, but i don't know how to explain it, it's more like. the drop begins, and normally it should make me move, It doesn't flow, like usual drum and bass does. The second part in the drop does though.
    Like i wanna start moving & dancing & skanking or whatever, but i can't because it doesn't let me flow ;p.
    don't know if that's the right way to explain it, but i can't really put my finger on it.

    Production wise it's great though
     
  10. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    yea i think i get u mate but i was aimin to make i kinda jumpy on the first drop stop an start etc
    but fair enuff its all bout preference cheers for checkin tho mate
     
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    Could you check out my last tune?


    and oh
    this is my first decent, Production wise, attempt to jump up:
     
  12. MARKLAR

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    yea will do tommorow mate too late for loud music now
     
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    I'm not big on the jump up only like a few bits and bobs but dig this.
     
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    I don't know the original at all, but this sounds good for me.
     
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    Sounding pretty good man, but i think its lacking energy, i heard another remix of this and when i compare to this it feels like its missing the engery
     
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    nice one mate, sounds good