Let's see:
You say it's time to tear the forum apart. You post an unfinished track, just to post it "mastered", then to say that the samples are sounding bad, and then saying they're mastered alright. And yet, you ask why people aren't feeling it.
Well, ManuForti resumed everything that's wrong with the track. And I also may add that you got to the right place with the wrong attitude.
Just chill out and ask politely for feedback, as many (if not all) of us do, and try to get better as many (if not all) of us do. Your cockiness won't take you anywhere.