Thin and Crispy - Girl, Believe

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  1. Thin and crispy

    Thin and crispy Active Member

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    Take a listen please! Comments and feedback back, give me your opinions. Good or bad its all appreciated!

    Thanks
    Mike

    Edit: just realised the abrupt ending, will sort that l8er lol
     
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    I think its sounding pretty tight man, i like ur drums alot, tho i think ur kicks are a little weird and its a little repetitive
     
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    cheers man, i've tryed layering like 8 other kick drums to no avail =/ still working on it tho! only started it today :) thing is i've used the break before and it sounded fine, so im at a loss atm haha
     
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    duttymonster deep in the jungle

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    i like the concept. i can see by looking at the waveform that the really deep long kick is way too loud in the mix. if you turn that down 50% you will be able to turn the whole tune up another 50%.
     
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    u mean the sub? =/
     
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    updated, broken it down a bit more, gone for the less is more approach and used each element more sparingly!
     
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    duttymonster deep in the jungle

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    it's like an 808 sub kick. can you not see it in the waveform? twice as loud as everything else.
     
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    i can, i dropped the volume and upped the rest of the track as you suggested... ? lol
    it is an 808 sub kick :p
     
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    duttymonster deep in the jungle

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    sounds much better (louder) i love the stutter/chop on the break and your track composition is very good. good work.