Stuck on this, could use another pair of ears

MDCNMN

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I could use some feedback on a track. To me, it's missing something and it might have too many things happening. Also when writing this one, I intended it to be more of a headphones track rather than something to be heard on the dance floor. Other than that, rip it apart, any feedback appreciated

https://clyp.it/dd3icbjq
 

Manu Forti

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For this style id say you need to look at your sound design and stereo width. Some cool sounds but they need to be better, jump into your mid range sounds with an EQ a distortion plug and a reverb/delay and tweak till your making some unique sounds. I think your arrangement and variation is on point though it just lacks depth for me.
 
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