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I could use some feedback on a track. To me, it's missing something and it might have too many things happening. Also when writing this one, I intended it to be more of a headphones track rather than something to be heard on the dance floor. Other than that, rip it apart, any feedback...

Hey I'm in the final stages of finishing this track. Any criticism would be very welcome as i'd like to send this track over to several promotors/labels ect, so i want it to be 'perfect'. Its private, so can't embed it here- delete one 'h' out of the link...