Self Ish - We Are Addicted

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Selfish, May 2, 2011.

  1. Selfish

    Selfish New Member

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    My newest track here. Put a lot of effort into it.
    All feedback is appreciated.
     
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    cmon guys if it is such a piece of shit just say so
     
  3. Cyclopyze

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    It has a nice chill vibe and the drums fall into place awesomely at 0:42. On the other hand, that voice ''Ah'' and the steady bass (even tho consistent with the vibe) don't fall in place so good (imo that is), it does sound better later on an break after 3:24. Also after that part it might be a good idea to add something more, dunno what but something to spice it up. I don't think this is a piece of shit, far from it, but i don't see enough variety in it (the song is basicly the same for 2min from 0:55).
    It has potential but it could use some working on.
    Just my 2 cents, im trying to be 100% honest here.
     
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    thanks, this is what I was hoping for.
     
  5. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Dude I like the main drop, loving the breakbeat vibe you've got here. Maybe do something more with the bassline?
    Also I agree on the vocal Ahh, it could use little bit of more reverb probably and maybe some filtering to blend it some more with the rest of the tune.

    Overall good work!