It has a nice chill vibe and the drums fall into place awesomely at 0:42. On the other hand, that voice ''Ah'' and the steady bass (even tho consistent with the vibe) don't fall in place so good (imo that is), it does sound better later on an break after 3:24. Also after that part it might be a good idea to add something more, dunno what but something to spice it up. I don't think this is a piece of shit, far from it, but i don't see enough variety in it (the song is basicly the same for 2min from 0:55).
It has potential but it could use some working on.
Just my 2 cents, im trying to be 100% honest here.