Rob the trusty steed - Death Dance Redone

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by whiterob81, Mar 3, 2013.

  1. whiterob81

    whiterob81 Member

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    Hi all, posted a track last week but redid it based on feedback i got here. Anyways, here's the redone version and I'm interested to know what people here think.

     
  2. W3st

    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    not my style but overall decent mixdown and production. idk it isnt my area so I cant give any real song structure advice but the levels are nice.

    one thing would be nice to hear is a punchy kick as there really is no audible punch on your kick. find better samples, transient shapers, compressors etc. but i kinda like it with the weak kick.... fuck it idk im tired as hell haha
     
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    sounds muddy, too much random sub and not really any defined groove learn some music theory and work on structure and all the rest
     
  4. whiterob81

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    Hey W3st, thanks for that. It's probably the first positive feedback I've gotten here so I must be starting to do something right!

    Hey pattycake, thanks for listening. I'll have a listen back and see what the story is with the sub. I am gonna disagree with you on 1 thing, I think my grasp of music theory's pretty good. It's the only part of this whole thing that I'm not unsure of