Rob the trusty steed - Death Dance Redone

[whiterob81]

Hi all, posted a track last week but redid it based on feedback i got here. Anyways, here's the redone version and I'm interested to know what people here think.

https://soundcloud.com/robthetrustysteed%2Fdeath-dance-redone

 

[W3st]

not my style but overall decent mixdown and production. idk it isnt my area so I cant give any real song structure advice but the levels are nice.

one thing would be nice to hear is a punchy kick as there really is no audible punch on your kick. find better samples, transient shapers, compressors etc. but i kinda like it with the weak kick.... fuck it idk im tired as hell haha

 

[Deleted member 85438]

sounds muddy, too much random sub and not really any defined groove learn some music theory and work on structure and all the rest

 

[whiterob81]

Hey W3st, thanks for that. It's probably the first positive feedback I've gotten here so I must be starting to do something right!

Hey pattycake, thanks for listening. I'll have a listen back and see what the story is with the sub. I am gonna disagree with you on 1 thing, I think my grasp of music theory's pretty good. It's the only part of this whole thing that I'm not unsure of