DnB New track from new DnB producer in Denmark

[celodnb]

Hi, it's my first post in this forum, so I hope I have put this in the right place. I've been learning to produce for just over a year now, and I'm ready to start posting my tracks on Soundcloud. As I'm new, I know there is much I need to learn, and I know my tracks are far from perfect, but I would some feedback if you have a moment to take a listen. Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/celodnb%2Ftribal

 

[Leniz]

If you want feedback post in https://dnbforum.com/forums/new-talent-track-reviews.21/
Much more responses than here

 

[celodnb]

Thanks very much, I'll try that