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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Phat_Sam, Feb 28, 2010.

  1. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    http://soundcloud.com/sam-underwood/drained-preview

    Only started it a few hours ago so its not perfect in any way shape or form... its also quite short...


    i just got exited cos it seemed to work quite quickly nd i just wanted opinions on it and maybe some suggestions on where i could take it.

    anywayy.. heres a preview guys..

    lemmie know what you think.

    REMEMBER... STILL A WORK IN PROGRESS!

    nice one!
     
  2. Indigo

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    listened to it , ill post some feedback tomorrow bud
    good work!
     
  3. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Nice track overall but the intro could use some more elements, its a nice intro but it gets a bit boring..
    the drop came in a bit weird with only the drums fading in, if I were you I would start building up to drop already around 1:30..
    after the drop I really liked the bassline and your mixdown sounds pretty tight..
    I'm pretty sure you can make a big track out of this, keep up the good work man !
     
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    yeah.. thanks mate... needed a fresh air of ears on it!


    ima try that!
     
  5. Indigo

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    i really like the minor notes put in here , deffo keep them and the bass !
    you have a hi hat before the drum beat comes in every 2nd beat , it needs some kind of hi pass reverb it sounds to bold , needs merging within the track more

    just make it longer and i can give you some better advice :)

    banger though!