Liquid D&B - Transitions - Chris Hawker

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  1. junglistguy2221

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    new bit. as always it isn't finished, but appreciate some feedback.

    bass is weak but just wanted to get the idea down, any tips welcome!
     
  2. kdk

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    I liked the beat; I really liked the piano breakdown. The vocal was a bit muddy, or at least, unclear. Maybe in the breakdown you could play it w/out effects or filters? I agree about the bass, though what I heard poking through was promising; maybe the bass is just a question of turning it up, or EQing, or something. Certainly, it's a good start...
     
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    Really like this one! The bass needs some more polishing and the vocal sounds a little weird sometimes, as if the quality were not so good...
     
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    d-low I know you got soul

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    good tune mate, i think criticisms would be mostly personal preference, for me the bass seems too dirty - for such a melodical tune, but i can easily imagine this coming on the radio or something
     
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    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    new version uploaded. thanks for all the feedback, still got things to change after this one.
     
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    I liked the energy, and the vocals seemed to sit better this time around. The mix seemed just a bit muddy to my ears; cutting frequencies on a voice or two, between 300 and 600 Hz, often helps scoop out the mud. The drums are really well done. I would like more movement in the bass, actually—the wubbing or whatever could push into the upper frequencies just a touch more. That's more my personal taste, really. The outro was kind of abrupt.

    Anyway, I did really like where you took this track.
     
  8. DjCartel

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    love the jazzy rides youve got going. beat could do with a bit of variation, otherwise its sounding good. some nice progressions and the vocal sits well. good work
     
  9. junglistguy2221

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    cheers. will try a version with more drum changes and some new elements.
     
  10. IV4

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    The bass is sounding muddy. Not bad just a little muddy. Also the vocal goes out of key every once in awhile. That is worth fixing.