Niwun
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- Aug 19, 2013
Keen for feedback, you chaps were well good with your comments last time I dropped by... Cheers in advance.
very good bass and synth sounds... but the outro is just a bit too long imo
Bass sounds are good. I would beef up the snare a bit, especially in its high end section. Love the pad in this!! It fits very well with the rest of the track. Word to the wise, if you wish to sign this somewhere don't uploaded in full and publicly. If save it as a private link, you can still share it in the forum like I do. But overall, well done on this track
Thanks for the feedback. Not sure if i'm really trying to sign it... I dont really know at what point I would do that. Hard to judge if its worth sending to labels.
Thanks for the advice on the snare, will change it next time. You fellas are champions, this is really useful information.
I wouldnt change the composition, the intro's length is textbook and the bar structure's fine. When it comes to judging if its good enough for a label run, the best thing to do is compare it to commercial track. Analyse and compare everything; mixing, complexity, energy, structure. The labels have a benchmark set with the tracks they release and the best thing you can do is aim as high as you can.
Its good to send to labels roughly in the same style, because even if it doesn't float their boat, you can still get some valuable feedback.
Has a unique sound to it..
In the part starting at 3:51 I'd add some variation for the arpeggio now and then (playing higher and/or notes in another order).