First off. I like the intro. Personally I'd have the Techno-sounding riff come in with the breakdown on the intro. I found the skeleton break needed to be brought out with some EQing.
The part after the breakdown I found the bass drum sounds unprofessional as it sounds like its sampled below 22k. Not into the bare 909 open hat.
The bassline would sound better if you introduced a sub-bass underneath it. Proper fat Amen break, well done! I think the chords your playing over the tune are far too loud - take them down a bit.
It has a wicked deep vibe to the structure. I do love the chords though, they just need turning down, or better still compressing. Maybe bring out the skeleton behind the Amen more? Change the Amen break a little for the second part?
It doesn't sound like you've compressed the main break. I think it would help to.
Overall, I found it had feeling and energy, with some tweaking I'd buy it on vinyl.
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