World Renowned - Total Silence (New tune inside)

[world renowned]

its my second tune take it easy on my...


www.djworldrenowned.com/audio/WorldRenowned-TotalSilence.m3u

 

[Dr. Ophalus]

First off. I like the intro. Personally I'd have the Techno-sounding riff come in with the breakdown on the intro. I found the skeleton break needed to be brought out with some EQing.

The part after the breakdown I found the bass drum sounds unprofessional as it sounds like its sampled below 22k. Not into the bare 909 open hat.

The bassline would sound better if you introduced a sub-bass underneath it. Proper fat Amen break, well done! I think the chords your playing over the tune are far too loud - take them down a bit.

It has a wicked deep vibe to the structure. I do love the chords though, they just need turning down, or better still compressing. Maybe bring out the skeleton behind the Amen more? Change the Amen break a little for the second part?

It doesn't sound like you've compressed the main break. I think it would help to.

Overall, I found it had feeling and energy, with some tweaking I'd buy it on vinyl.

Are you English?

Check my pose on here and give me feedback please I'm interested.

 

[world renowned]

First off. I like the intro. Personally I'd have the Techno-sounding riff come in with the breakdown on the intro. I found the skeleton break needed to be brought out with some EQing.

The part after the breakdown I found the bass drum sounds unprofessional as it sounds like its sampled below 22k. Not into the bare 909 open hat.

The bassline would sound better if you introduced a sub-bass underneath it. Proper fat Amen break, well done! I think the chords your playing over the tune are far too loud - take them down a bit.

It has a wicked deep vibe to the structure. I do love the chords though, they just need turning down, or better still compressing. Maybe bring out the skeleton behind the Amen more? Change the Amen break a little for the second part?

It doesn't sound like you've compressed the main break. I think it would help to.

Overall, I found it had feeling and energy, with some tweaking I'd buy it on vinyl.

Are you English?

Check my pose on here and give me feedback please I'm interested.

thanks for all the feedback...

I'm American

and this is my second ever track...it was done in fruity...next project i start in Cuebase....

i just got sent a ton of drums and samples by a sympathetic producer...so i think next track will be much better while i continue to learn the nuances of eqing, compressing and adding reverb to places that need it

thanks for the detailed review

 

[DJFlexie]

w000t w000t..i like it

 

[world renowned]

w000t w000t..i like it