Thanks for your advice. I will try to manipulate with the compression on master as you suggest. You both probably hear what im not hearing on my shitty alesis m1 active speakers, because for me the track sounds quite nice. Or maybe im simply deaf, lol
So. I will try to do my best and upload it once more.
right the melody of all the instruments is amazing... you are a very v musical person. structure is amazing aswell.
i really think your drums may be letting you down... and you might need to work on how clean your bass is aswell... but its hard to tell with those drums covering them up..
this might all just be being effected by the mixdown... you may actually have very clean drums and clean bass, but it certainly is not coming accross that way either because of the mixdown or the sound quality...
soo... when are you going to sign the deal with hospital records my friend??