sounds pretty cool man.
the squawky synth you have in the beginning is almost identical to a tune i've heard before in timber and really, really close in notation -- maybe it was pendulum, yeh I think it was, go listen to their 2007 release and tell me it isn't nearly the same shit...
drop is cool
drums have an old-skool tech-step thing going on, kinda quantized -- if you are into it I would suggest a less rigid feel. for example if your snares are on exactly on the second and 4th beat and your kicks are exactly on the first and 3rd &1/2 beat it's gonna sound like that..
one thing that might help is to use different samples for each hi-hat, and to vary the amount you delay 1/8th notes to get your shuffle, rather than using a rigid quantize like the quantize bar on the pattern editor in fruity.