The Riff- Modz

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by modz, Jan 13, 2015.

  1. modz

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    2nd Update :)

    Trying to work out a new track. I'm still working on my synths, just trying to make something cool and grungy.

    So please feel free to comment of my progress :)
     
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    I feel as if some of the drums are a bit light. I would try to work on those a bit. Also, at 0:22, I would add some sub-bass to make it more appealing.

    I do like your progress though. Great Job ;)
     
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    thank you :) I went back to fix the things you pointed out and I pretty much revised almost everything lol.
     
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    That's really not bad! It's something I don't hear alot, really awesome
    One thing though: not to keen on the kick, I get that you want to have a live feel on the drums but I feel the kick is to boomy, airy.
    But that might be just personal taste
     
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    wow thank you :) I went back and tried to fix the kick. Also I did some eq'ing and extended the track. I was really thinking about adding more drums but super glitched in the last half at 1:50