The stab at 57 seconds and which repeats throughout could probably be 2-3dB quieter. It is a nice sounding stab though! In terms of cleaner parts, I like shorter drum and percussion hits, so they sound a little tighter. It also sounds like they may have a slightly too long reverb tail? It's hard to tell to clearly without hearing the original samples. Where is that snare from by the way? It sounds very sub focus/culture shock