some advice on tune is it hitting right where am i going wrong plz check it out

[dahashman]

some advice on tune is it hitting right where am i going wrong plz check it out http://soundcloud.com/deejayops/nevergoback-djopz

https://soundcloud.com/

 

[Shock/Tactics]

Hey man really like this one actually. Think the main bass synth is really good! I would maybe suggest laying your drums, so you have a nice sustaining top end snare sound with a low-mid end snare underneath to give it that punch because it can be a bitch finding one snare on its own that will sound really good in a track. Also maybe change the velocity on the hats so it sounds more natural instead of a drum machine. But nice work none the less

 

[richie_stix]

track missing... plus dis goes in 'new talent' not production

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managed to track it down... err, nice synths... drums sound a touch flat?

if im honest, there are too many drums for this kinda b-line... i'd have far more minimal for the drop, then switch the drums more full and fast paced at like 16/32 bars after the drop or something?

my two cents...

 

[Shock/Tactics]

Just go on http://soundcloud.com/deejayops and find the track