Overused his first demo

[Overused]

Just recently started producing dnb after a period of dubstep This is the first thing that I made.
Ofcourse, it isn't finished yet and the subbass needs A LOT of work but please do tell me what you think about it. Need your feedback

https://soundcloud.com/overused%2Foverused-demo-1-not-finished

 

[Fishy:)]

Doesent sound to bad, i think ur drums is abit to weak and simple and i would like to hear some more modulation on the bass seems pretty stale. Seems pretty strange musically to especially towards the end. but for a first try on dnb it isent bad

 

[ARTFX]

Hey mate, welcome on the forum. Good to see someone from Holland here!
It's a pretty good start but it all sounds a little too repetitive, there isn't that much motion in the sound.
Put some modulation on the bassline, maybe distort it a bit more. Also work on the drums, they need more fatness, if you know what I mean.

 

[thenewfastlane]

There's allot of energy in this track, and energy is only a good thing. Work a bit on the levels when you mix down so - as ARTFX said, the percs have a bit more fatness. The bassline also has a bit too much high end imo. Cut off the top and experiement with the beeps. Modulation, some glitching on every 8th beat? Just an idea

 

[Overused]

Thanks for the comments guy's, this is the kind of feedback that I need.
I am gonna try to work on those things, thanks thanks!