Overused his first demo

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Overused, Jan 25, 2011.

  1. Overused

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    Just recently started producing dnb after a period of dubstep :) This is the first thing that I made.
    Ofcourse, it isn't finished yet and the subbass needs A LOT of work but please do tell me what you think about it. Need your feedback

     
  2. Fishy:)

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    Doesent sound to bad, i think ur drums is abit to weak and simple:p and i would like to hear some more modulation on the bass seems pretty stale. Seems pretty strange musically to especially towards the end. but for a first try on dnb it isent bad:)
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Hey mate, welcome on the forum. Good to see someone from Holland here! :D
    It's a pretty good start but it all sounds a little too repetitive, there isn't that much motion in the sound.
    Put some modulation on the bassline, maybe distort it a bit more. Also work on the drums, they need more fatness, if you know what I mean.
     
  4. thenewfastlane

    thenewfastlane By The Low Road

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    There's allot of energy in this track, and energy is only a good thing. Work a bit on the levels when you mix down so - as ARTFX said, the percs have a bit more fatness. The bassline also has a bit too much high end imo. Cut off the top and experiement with the beeps. Modulation, some glitching on every 8th beat? Just an idea
     
  5. Overused

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    Thanks for the comments guy's, this is the kind of feedback that I need.
    I am gonna try to work on those things, thanks thanks!