I like the ideas in this track but the most off-putting thing is the main synth, I feel its too loud, and the notes you play with it don't seem to flow, they seem random, and I cant seem to get my head around the melody. The actual synth sound is strange, but thats good, I just think you should try and improve the melody, and get a more 'fuller' sound from it by processing further.
The kick also sounds a little distorted.. not sure if thats intended or not.
I like the rest of the track though... cool atmosphere
Thank you for the feedback!
The distorted kick is intended.
I also am not that statisfied with that track. It was kind of an experiment. Trying to create some huge sounding "epic" dubstep. So I'm not working on it anymore. I'm already producing a new track that is my usual style again.