I like the ideas in this track but the most off-putting thing is the main synth, I feel its too loud, and the notes you play with it don't seem to flow, they seem random, and I cant seem to get my head around the melody. The actual synth sound is strange, but thats good, I just think you should try and improve the melody, and get a more 'fuller' sound from it by processing further.
The kick also sounds a little distorted.. not sure if thats intended or not.
I like the rest of the track though... cool atmosphere
