new tune - random flow

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by co0ke, Aug 28, 2008.

  1. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    hi all. i have been interested in making music for a while, but have rarely attempted to make dnb style music. i use reason 4.

    http://www.soundclick.com/co0ke
    (the name of the tune is random flow)

    this is the result i am most happy with, and i am well aware it pails in comparison to the other tunes on this site. at this stage i am just looking to progress, not impress.

    it is not the finished tune, i just sort of hit a brick wall with it.

    one thing im sure of is that it is desperately lacking in the bass department, but i cant get a good bass sound from scratch.

    any help/feedback/input would be greatly appreciated.

    peace
     
  2. freestyle

    freestyle I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    hello... this seems ok, very spacey sounding, waiting for the drop.....

    thats bass is ok but i think i would prefere a deeper and smoother bass, the bass you have in the intro would much better suit this tune i think just dont make it wobble so much, you could have a slow attack using the same bass in the intro with a quick sub stabbin to give its punch, its hard to explain and i hope you catch my drift.

    peace.
     
  3. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    thanks for your words man. i think i understand what you mean with regards to the bass. need to get back in the zoneĀ¬!
     
  4. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    not to keen on your snare-short it a bit-cut length of snare sample
    like the change-nice drop
    sounds as your main bass could use a bit of sub to it -i like to layer using the same pattern and shift down an octive or two-simple but effective
    sounds as your fx and other is well in order and think you could have a good choon on your hands bro
    keep at it
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    yeah. good tune man.
    Just keep pluggin mate. doin well