dude the arrangement on this is pretty awesome
i love how you cut out the drums in places after the drop
the vox sample is quite jokes, you could work with it though like layer particular words that you want to stand out (and put a wet reverb on the layered ones)
example:
listen from 0.30 - 0.45
(see how they put emphasis on 'six step easy to follow guide' with the use of reverb? subtle but effective imo)
not a big fan of the lfo'd bassline, its pretty generic
the vol of some instruments is a bit low, eg i think the piano should be louder, and i think you could put a reverb (or a bigger reverb) on more stuff
the atmospherics are pretty cool, but they could be louder
but good job man, i think it's an intelligently written track