new track...HOSTILE!...Work in progress..ruff around the edges. Please feed back

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fratanize, Feb 21, 2008.

  1. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    This one is a bit ropey at the moment. Sounded better on my headphones. Please feedback, all opinions are respected. No beef tho.
    peace
     
  2. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    (yn)mate its sick. Much respect.
     
  3. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    your drum edits are getting much better man
    like the sample but the drum line doesnt quite fit with it-time for amen madness imo
    like the sweeping riser in the background
    sounds are all starting to fit together on equal levels
    nice werk man
     
  4. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    you need to beef up ya drum a bit mate
     
  5. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    only kidding dude

    it a nice tune mate, can hear you are eqing a bit more, drums are sounding much better
    bass sounded pretty good
    looking forward to ya next tune
     
  6. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    Cheers fellaz.
    Vick. The whole time making that tune i was considering the amen breakage. Thinkin the tune is gonna get a whole lot more hostile. Cheers barnz and darkist. Gonna polish it up and post it again when done.
    Praise the day when i can order them monitors!!!!
    Peace
     
  7. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i think you would benefit alot from looking at other tunes and how they are put together, which bits work with which, what flows into the other and so forth, your structure is pretty random apart from the buildups. theyre are cool. i like the big old bass stab, sounds analouge

    just a break a sub and a pad/string arrangement is like if you get that right youre well on your way.
     
  8. C Dusk

    C Dusk 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    So, we all gone of beef then. lol. Your style is defo coming through wit your tracks. Logiks has a good point about structure. Try listening to a good release and time at what point a drops come and so on. You do find some great sounds bro. Keep on it. :rslayer: