new noob sound, check it out ;)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by stoneagepl, Jul 15, 2012.

  1. stoneagepl

    stoneagepl Member

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    hai there, im new to this forum - i got in here to learn more about production and just to show the world songs :) please let me know what you think of it - thnx for any comments!



    new mix:



    cheers!
     
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    You have lots of great ideas. I love that stab. You need to learn how to mix. Use your eqs more. Other than that the track was fun.
     
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    Thanks for really quick and encouraging for further work comment :D So as You say since tomorrow I will get more into mixin stuff, hope next song will sound better! Thnx once again cheers
     
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    I agree with, IV4. Fun track, but the mix was messy, still a nice track though, good going with it!
     
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    Sounds good to me though I'd like more structure to the overall tune i.e. builds breakdowns different sections etc.
     
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    I like the track but my advice is to be more precice with the snare. Let it stand out a bit more :)
     
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    allright then, i did (imo) better mix, i upload this now only listenin on headphones - i believe its ok :D please say something if its better, or maybe worse ? thnx!

     
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    I'm listening in head phones and the song sounds much better.
     
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    thnx IV4, you the Man on the place always ready to feedback! :) i did sidechainin - that cleared the track well. i also throw out some useless samples that were causing nothin but noise.
     
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    Much better with the brighter snare :)
     
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    Wow man this is very cool. I really enjoyed this. The bass is especially cool. Gets stuck in my head.