thought the snare could use some more 'hiss' in the beginning and the hats could be a little more prominent. sounds good eqed so far tho. everything has its own sorta space etc, some finetuning with the switchups could be made tho, the think break comes in a bit too fast and fades out too fast for my likings, maybe play it the whole time aswell?! could make the break more prominent and add some more hiss.
think the offbeat thingy could be louder and clearer - and your low mids are somewhat muddy after the drop..
overall a good idea, tho i dont really like the piano - just too easy for my likings i assume - just work on the mixdown a bit more, get the muddines out and so on.
good work!