need critics

[Schizorabbit]

this is the 3rd track I ever uploaded
(I originally wanted to make it more synthbased but my pianotardness forced me to fill the 2nd half with pianosounds)
I need some feedback so that I can develope / make better music

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ftimepastwalk%2Fblocks-of-flats

 

[MisterApe]

Some of those sounds need some serious eq'ing to make the hi's less piercing in the ears.
Interesting ideas though!

 

[Pyrococcus]

Mental
However the piano chords from 0:45 to 1:15 are just too dull, and the tune is lacking a bassline.

 

[Deleted member 23164]

u got like 5 tunes in there..

the intro is actually amazing. the best part imo. sounds like an alix perez tune.. then it drops and i am dissapoint...

0:40-0:43 wud make a sick jamp up tune.

1:16-1:24 wud make a beautiful calibre sounding liquid tune. literally make the whole tune with that lil bit..

etc etc..

 

[Dark Lizardro]

I don't know if MisterApe, Pyrococcus and Castel felt the same thing, but to me it felt like the whole song was "muffled". I believe there are something going on the lower frequencies. Just check that out. Composition-wise, it's a good track, I liked the piano parts! I love when synthesized sounds are mixed with "organic" sounds.