my first proper attempt at jump up

Discussion in 'Production' started by kaser, Feb 15, 2010.

  1. kaser

    kaser Member

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    ok, i've been producing for a while now, mostly dubstep as its so much easier than dnb lol.

    made this the other day : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRFUy0dZJd4&feature=channel
    suggestions for the full track please? all criticism welcome i know its simple which is why im asking for a help.
    I'm really trying to get the bluefoot kinda wobbles but making no progress at all, any pointers would be lovely jubbly. Using good old FL Studio too.
     
  2. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    I think the snare needs a bit more depth. Actually, maybe the whole tune needs more depth to it, it seems quite flat if that makes sense...
     
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    try switching up the sounds abit, that one crushed sound, even tho i like the sounds, gets a bit boring after a while
     
  4. Phat_Sam

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    i like it mate. i do agrees with the other comments made though

    you definately need to use that metallic datsik sounding synth a bit more too. unless its part of the vocals? i dunno.

    really good effort though
     
  5. Indigo

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    That is a sweet attempt bro , again boost the snare up , maybe around 250hz?