My first DnB Track, In Fruityloops...(unfinished)

[Shintoshio]

Its not finished or mastered yet so, keep checkin this thread
& leave feedback
Sins Of The Future.mp3

 

[Robert G]

Well the 33 seconds it let me hear in the player sounded good.

 

[Jolly Jumpa]

Piano is a little too high in some frequencies, lower the mid frequencies and don't make it sound so... boxy or... small roomish... I mean there's a place for it, but just doesn't fit with this. Give it a bit of reverb/long delay with decay set short-medium.
Um, beats are alright, not great, they need quiet a bit of work (hi hats, snare is alright, bass kick needs a little more definition, cymbal is almost null - turn it a little).
Keep it up, it'll get better.
Steve

 

[Shintoshio]

bump

 

[5IVE7EVEN9INE]

oi get a soundcloud (or the like), much more likely to get comment there and here, people, like myself :/, are too lazy and dont want to download the song.safe.