My first DnB Track, In Fruityloops...(unfinished)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Shintoshio, May 31, 2010.

  1. Shintoshio

    Shintoshio New Member

    Joined:
    May 31, 2010
    Messages:
    22
    Likes Received:
    0
  2. Robert G

    Robert G Member

    Joined:
    Jan 9, 2009
    Messages:
    117
    Likes Received:
    0
    Well the 33 seconds it let me hear in the player sounded good.
     
  3. Jolly Jumpa

    Jolly Jumpa Dj Synergex

    Joined:
    Dec 24, 2007
    Messages:
    132
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Canada
    Piano is a little too high in some frequencies, lower the mid frequencies and don't make it sound so... boxy or... small roomish... I mean there's a place for it, but just doesn't fit with this. Give it a bit of reverb/long delay with decay set short-medium.
    Um, beats are alright, not great, they need quiet a bit of work (hi hats, snare is alright, bass kick needs a little more definition, cymbal is almost null - turn it a little).
    Keep it up, it'll get better.
    Steve
     
  4. Shintoshio

    Shintoshio New Member

    Joined:
    May 31, 2010
    Messages:
    22
    Likes Received:
    0
  5. 5IVE7EVEN9INE

    5IVE7EVEN9INE 14

    Joined:
    Mar 5, 2010
    Messages:
    38
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Colo.
    oi get a soundcloud (or the like), much more likely to get comment there and here, people, like myself :/, are too lazy and dont want to download the song.safe.