Left Aside (Final version)

[BLoodstaiN`]

https://soundcloud.com/subtitude%2Fsubtitude-left-aside-original

Final version, i've put quite some effort in it, it got a lot of big changes.
but this is where i'm at.
First liquid track that i finished!

Comments are highly appreciated,
and i hope you enjoy the tune.

 

[BLoodstaiN`]

no one?

 

[Digitalbil]

I like it.. I think drums sound nice and clean... however my only constructive criticism would be that the track needs to develop the main part more... I also expected for it to kick over once everything hit and it didnt, however I understand that might not be the style that you were going for.. so take that with a grain of salt. I would just say that it needs to progress more, otherwise you have a good track on your hands..

 

[paracyte]

Ez
Second drop needs improvement,
it goes from beat to beat and melody at the moment
Give us a moment to take a breath
Your melody line needs improvement
It's boring allready after 1st part of the tune,.
Try to use a different synth with different melody time to time.
Good base for a nice track.
Keep up the work .
Cheers.

 

[BLoodstaiN`]

Ez
Second drop needs improvement,
it goes from beat to beat and melody at the moment
Give us a moment to take a breath
Your melody line needs improvement
It's boring allready after 1st part of the tune,.
Try to use a different synth with different melody time to time.
Good base for a nice track.
Keep up the work .
Cheers.

Was afraid for that, melody thing ;p. Like an A part & a B part, and this is just A A A A,
but will work on it!
thanks for the constructive criticism

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I also expected for it to kick over once everything hit and it didnt,

Don't really get what you mean there.
could you explain that?