Left Aside (Final version)

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  1. BLoodstaiN`

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    Final version, i've put quite some effort in it, it got a lot of big changes.
    but this is where i'm at.
    First liquid track that i finished!

    Comments are highly appreciated,
    and i hope you enjoy the tune.
     
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    I like it.. I think drums sound nice and clean... however my only constructive criticism would be that the track needs to develop the main part more... I also expected for it to kick over once everything hit and it didnt, however I understand that might not be the style that you were going for.. so take that with a grain of salt. I would just say that it needs to progress more, otherwise you have a good track on your hands..
     
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    Second drop needs improvement,
    it goes from beat to beat and melody at the moment
    Give us a moment to take a breath ;)
    Your melody line needs improvement
    It's boring allready after 1st part of the tune,.
    Try to use a different synth with different melody time to time.
    Good base for a nice track.
    Keep up the work .
    Cheers.
     
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    Was afraid for that, melody thing ;p. Like an A part & a B part, and this is just A A A A,
    but will work on it!
    thanks for the constructive criticism

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    Don't really get what you mean there.
    could you explain that?