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I like it.. I think drums sound nice and clean... however my only constructive criticism would be that the track needs to develop the main part more... I also expected for it to kick over once everything hit and it didnt, however I understand that might not be the style that you were going for.. so take that with a grain of salt. I would just say that it needs to progress more, otherwise you have a good track on your hands..
 
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Ez
Second drop needs improvement,
it goes from beat to beat and melody at the moment
Give us a moment to take a breath ;)
Your melody line needs improvement
It's boring allready after 1st part of the tune,.
Try to use a different synth with different melody time to time.
Good base for a nice track.
Keep up the work .
Cheers.
 
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Ez
Second drop needs improvement,
it goes from beat to beat and melody at the moment
Give us a moment to take a breath ;)
Your melody line needs improvement
It's boring allready after 1st part of the tune,.
Try to use a different synth with different melody time to time.
Good base for a nice track.
Keep up the work .
Cheers.
Was afraid for that, melody thing ;p. Like an A part & a B part, and this is just A A A A,
but will work on it!
thanks for the constructive criticism

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I also expected for it to kick over once everything hit and it didnt,
Don't really get what you mean there.
could you explain that?
 
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