I like the muffled drum parts in the intro, they've got nice heft; makes me think of a guy just going crazy on some toms, really letting loose. I gotta agree with some of the previous comments here; once we get to the drop, it's a cool progression and rhythms and all that, but I think the sustained bass you have that's kind of providing the low end could stand to be distorted and torn up, and then modulated with filters and the like. Of course, the lowest end should stay clean, but maybe do some freq splitting and just destroy the mids and highs. Slap ohmicide on there or something, then write in some automation that keeps the energy moving forward into each downbeat, if you know what I mean (like, filters relatively closed at beginning of each note, then swell open towards the next note, with variations to taste). Could really boost this track, I think. Really cool stuff as is though, it's got good DNA, if you know what I mean. Drums could come up a bit in volume I think. Keep it up man!