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ApeCat

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#6
I think the synth should only play two notes over and over until the drums come in, like "bleeep - blooop - bleeep - blooop - bleeep - blooop!" and leave the jumping all over the place for a little later to make it more surprising.

Got I say I start hating that synth later on, but it's a tight track, init, especially around the two minute mark!!
 

ThePapa

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#7
Lol! Mr IV4 I realise drops are the hardest thing to write but that intro sounds like it's building up to a huge amen drop...it's kinda misleading. First time I've heard your stuff though sounds good! If you can find the right tune for that intro you'll be laughing...
 

IV4

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#8
Thanks guys.
Yea the intro sucks. I just gave up on it. I don't know about you guys but I always build the drop first then stuggle with what I should do with the intro and breakdown. This comes from my DJ days when I would spin songs with these amazing intros and breakdowns but the drop sucked. To me it was like a beautiful girl teasing you all night of what kind of a freak she is going to be and then... bam!!! She passes out and your left getting a hand job from her fat ugly friend. It's alright, but not what you hoped for.
 

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#9
hmm.....intro sounds like an old retro computer game....Not sure I like it TBH...sorry.

I like the beat, simple but effective. I like the drop, but I honestly think that drop would sound a million times better without that sound, lose it....do it....go on.....I dare ya ;)
 

dar kist

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#10
yea ditch the synth all together imo, get really annoying after a while, drums sound good, but the break in the back ground needs work, nice flow, bass gets a bit repetitive after the second drop. keep it up bro
 

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#12
ooo....ehhh.mmmmm... I don't know .... I got a version with out the bleeps because I not to wild about them either. I just thought they where better at filling out the space then nothing.
 

subprime

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#13
Did you do some resampling then? Liking what you've done with the bass sounds whatever it was!

That seamless flow from intro to drop to breakdown etc can be a tricky beast eh. Find that hard as myself too.
Keep tweaking the bass tho! Sounding good.
 
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