Drum & Bass Camel Toe - Work in progress

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Skuff, Aug 15, 2013.

  1. Skuff

    Skuff Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    1,039
    Likes Received:
    86
    Location:
    Essex
    Easy peeps. been working on and off on this for a couple of days, and would appreciate some feedback and suggestions.
     
  2. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2012
    Messages:
    1,184
    Likes Received:
    166
    Location:
    surrey
    yo man, checked this out last night, soudns wicked. love that slightly off beat bass youve got. its very stripped back. drums sound clear too. id keep going as you are with it!
     
  3. bleeeex

    bleeeex New Member

    Joined:
    Aug 9, 2013
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    I cant give you any advice on it, but I do like it!
     
  4. lasiien

    lasiien Meh

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2012
    Messages:
    318
    Likes Received:
    64
    Location:
    Chester, UK
    lol@the title, and you even went to the trouble of a picture too :) Also like the off beat bass, nice touch. Nothing I can add tbh, I would say the track has room for more - maybe vary some fx in places?
     
  5. kdk

    kdk Member

    Joined:
    Nov 8, 2012
    Messages:
    185
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Santee, California, United States
    Really solid, well mixed and everything. I agree it could stand to have more added to it. Love the drums...
     
  6. Skuff

    Skuff Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    1,039
    Likes Received:
    86
    Location:
    Essex
    Thanks peeps. I gave it that name after a picture I posed for my Mrs ended up on her Facebook yesterday and I got ribbed to hell haha. Gonna actually change the PIC to one that my old pal photoshopped. Def not one for the weak hearted lol. I hear what your saying about room for more, couldn't quite put my finger on what it needed, which is why I put it up for suggestions. So any more ideas appreciated
     
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2013
  7. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Nice so far. The intro is sweet. The vocal is hitting like an E I think and then the piano resolves to a D. Then the bass is on E too which builds tension, up to 1:28 ish. I think it sounds like it needs to resolve to D also for the proper drop after 1:28 but that will put your sub below 40 hz which may or may not be desirable. So you could transpose everything up two semitones so for the first part the piano is E, vocal/bass is F sharp and then drop the bass to E for the main drop. And it could get more techy after that. Loads of potential, I like it.
     
    Last edited: Aug 16, 2013
  8. Skuff

    Skuff Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    1,039
    Likes Received:
    86
    Location:
    Essex
    Damn that's some mad ass reply lol nice one man. Yeah everything is pretty much E, so I'll see if what you've suggested works. Nice one :)